Since the entirety of her vision has flooded with white (like frost on her sill at winter or strawberry cream), save for twin punctuation marks in lightest blue, Rapunzel decides to close her eyes as she screams, though this has the depersonalising side-effect of making it sound like there are two of her screaming instead of two different women...
Wait. Two different women? What would that look like?
Her eyes flash open and drop down. Then, almost immediately, her face warms, peachy cheeks turning pink as her freckles seem to darken; something tells her she should not be looking at another person's... body. Like this. Like. Intimately.
A rather similar something tells her that this has got to be the most embarrassing, violating, incomprehensible "surprise" she's found all day, and forces her to look away sharply. Even if she's not entirely sure what this feeling means or where it comes from. ] SORRY! I– [ still blushing, not screaming ] I'm... I'm sorry. Madam.
[ that's how you address another woman respectfully, right? ]
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Since the entirety of her vision has flooded with white (like frost on her sill at winter or strawberry cream), save for twin punctuation marks in lightest blue, Rapunzel decides to close her eyes as she screams, though this has the depersonalising side-effect of making it sound like there are two of her screaming instead of two different women...
Wait. Two different women? What would that look like?
Her eyes flash open and drop down. Then, almost immediately, her face warms, peachy cheeks turning pink as her freckles seem to darken; something tells her she should not be looking at another person's... body. Like this. Like. Intimately.
A rather similar something tells her that this has got to be the most embarrassing, violating, incomprehensible "surprise" she's found all day, and forces her to look away sharply. Even if she's not entirely sure what this feeling means or where it comes from. ] SORRY! I– [ still blushing, not screaming ] I'm... I'm sorry. Madam.
[ that's how you address another woman respectfully, right? ]